1 thought on “JULIA JORGENSEN: Peel

  1. Julia, try changing to first person. Just a suggestion. I pasted my try at your great story.

    I jumped into the front seat of grandpa’s car; he always lets me sit in front.
    “Two of these are for you,” he said, handing me three tangerines. We ate them as he drove me home from ballet.
    I left the peelings in his cup-holder where the smell lingers, still.

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