He’s impatient, insisting she experiences this fantastic view. It’s spectacular, definitely worth the strenuous climb. Turquoise sea, golden rocks, shy wildflowers. Swooping boat far below, sails billowing. He’s standing right behind her, laughing, pointing everything out. She suspects his uncharacteristic enthusiasm. Sidesteps just in time.
He barely makes a splash.
Deborah writes at an old desk surrounded by five hundred pet bugs.
Love this!
what a lot of story telling you packed into 50 words!
Kudos on this one!
Wow Deb , I’m cancelling our date.
Good job, well written.
Good one, Deborah! You never disappoint.
Great little tale. I must admit, I fell for it.
A true ‘cliff-hanger’ …