You used to stay up until dawn, captivated by my possibilities.
You would scribble clandestine notes for me at work and rush home to resume our tryst.
Now, you complain I’m all drudge.
“Back soon,” you promise, but I’ve seen you…
…courting fresh plots, exotic characters, and even fifty-word stories!
Joanna Norland revised this story nine times.
This is an utter joy, Joanna! Im going to save this one to read again & again.
thank you!
True. 50-word stories need just as much revision as longer ones.
What I love about the genre is that you really can examine every word. xx
Very clever and oh so true. I loved it.
Wow! thank you. xx
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I love your choice of POV. This could easily have been written from the writer’s perspective, but your way packs a lot more punch.
thank you !
Oh, the fellow feeling here is perfect!
Good to know it struck a chord!
Careful, Raine. Joanna is after your most private thoughts too.