There used to be a place you could go, a place with infinite possibilities. I think you got there underwater; might’ve been just under that riverbank. Someone I used to know has been there. He was younger then. Doesn’t remember much.
Can’t go there anymore, of course. River’s too low.
Tim Sevenhuysen is the creator of FiftyWordStories.com.
I know a place like that.
Been there. Go back – in my mind anyway.
I miss it.
Thanks for bringing it back, Tim ❤️
Nice to see one of your stories, Tim!
i agree. Great to see your story here, Tim!
Yes, what a nice surprise to see your story today, well done!
This resonates so intriguingly with your story, ‘New Stars’ – the whole is greater than the sum of its parts. https://www.joannanorland.com/post/tim-sevenhuysen-microfiction
Are you implying a connection between the two? ;)
I’ve always wanted to write a 50 word story series – you’ve beaten me to it! I love the continuity in voice. xx
Nice. I like the twist at the end
Solid!
How wonderful to read your story, Tim!
Keep coming back to this, Tim – love it!