Like a doppelganger, he emerged from the 1982 Datsun hatchback dressed as a pizza delivery guy. Complete with greasy pizza box, he sleazed his way across the street and up onto the front porch and rang the bell.
“Pizza for Tony Rizzetti.”
“I didn’t order a pizza.”
“You’ve been served.”
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I think the “dressed as a pizza delivery guy” is redundant to carrying the pizza box. The vision of carrying a pizza box can get the idea across without spelling it ut.
Jeff: My thought was that some delivery guys wear actual uniforms, and some just wear regular clothes (a mom and pop pizza joint). But thanks for the feedback. I’ll take it under advisement.