She smiles, legs dangling carelessly from the roof. Blue eyes reflect an array of glittering galaxies.
Twinkle twinkle
Another speckle dots the black.
little star.
Expanding rapidly.
How I wonder
Her eyes widen, stomach tightening.
what
Hands clasp ears over the meteoric roars
you
Sirens. A mother’s horrified scream.
are…
Fifteen-year-old Megan lives in Florida with her family and her cat named Luna Petra Zane. This is her first “plunge” into the realm of 50 word fiction.
Nice.
Wonderful! The structure creates the drama.
Young lady,
you have a bright future ahead of you in writing. Great piece.
The format of this is so well done!
A rather unique way of storytelling.Good stuff!