He doesn’t take his eyes off his book.
I’m with an umbrella on a bench. I’ve been waiting for him to look at me; I don’t have time. They’re throwing the old statues away.
Whenever the stone boy finishes his book, tell him a stone girl was waiting for him.
Sunset wrote this story.
Love it!
Thanks for attention!
Very beautiful sunset ❤️❤️ I’m sure when the stone boy finishes his book, he will recognize the beauty in your words💕
Well done, sister SUNSET
I’m so proud of you.
Beautiful story, you are so creative.
Nice writing. You got talent of a good writer.
Thank you so much! It’s so nice of you.
That’s wonderful! I feel the inspiration that made you write this. This really what keeps you going.
Word choice, comparisons, the feelings this sorry tells.. Such a masterpiece.
Keep going. Good luck. :)
It is amazing .
I love it! Keep the good work up🌼🌼🧚♂️
Thanks a bunch!
Thank you so much!
An original and tender story
It’s so nice of you.Thank you so muc!
Nice job sunset
You’re so talented. Keep it up Sunset.🌹
Thanks a bunch 🌹🌹
What’s more difficult than writing a story?
– Writing a good ‘short’ story.
Beautifully written, skillfully constructed.
I’d definitely love to read more.
Thank you so much for motivating me🌹🌹
Impressive Sunset!!
Thanks a bunch!
Very engaging and well written Sunset, keep writing, love to read your stories!
Thank you so much! It’s so nice of you.
Looking good as usual. Keep up the hard work. You’ll be a great writer one day.
Thank you so much! I’ll do my best.
Thought provoking and melancholy. Excellent short story!
Thank you so much!
I couldn’t imagine how romance might be a stone. But by your figarative language, you made me imagine a story not just a piece of poetry. Adorable!
Thank you so much for your valuable comment!!
I do find you Sunset as a creative story teller. Very imagnitive and fully capable of making words dance.. The stone romance story itself is good. Keep it up.
My friend Sunset, the stone girl is more patient than me. I probably wouldn’t waste my time with him.
I am so proud of you because you transmited with few words too much feeling.
Thank you so much my dear friend! Thanks for paying attention to the story.
My pleasure! Please let me know the oyher ones.
Thank you very much for commenting on Stone Romance and for your kindness!
Absolutely loved reading your short story! The last part was the one that I liked the most: using ‘stone’ to describe the boy that doesn’t realize the feelings of the girl, and using it as well to describe the girl that waits as long time as it is needed to the boy to realize it… So cute and real!
Thank you so much for priceless comment!
I’m really glad you liked it and you got what I tried to say.
Nice one, I really liked the expressions used. I can even imagine the situation in my head.
Amazing
Thank you so much! You have a good imagination. 😉
No one is you and that is your power. Deep thoughts. Nice short story. I like comparing feelings to stone. What are we really like? Maybe we don’t notice anyone around, either? I’m waiting for more stories.
Thank you so much for this valuable comment!
I’m really glad you liked it and thanks a bunch for motivating me.
Good job dear. keep it up
Thanks a bunch!
Thank you so much dear Haya!
Well done!
Thank you so much!
Good job👏🏻Wish i had a creative mind like you😊well done 🎈🎈
Thanks for your kind words!
Wow sunset
Nice one
Keep it up 👏👏👏👏👏
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Thanks a bunch for motivating me
You’re such a creative writer, Sunset!
Beautiful story. Keep it up 👍
That’s so beautiful and touching! I feel her emotions. 😭 I hope they will have any magic for their love.
You got talent of a good writer, keep going.
Great efforts 👌👍 keep it up
I love it sunset🌹🌹it was so beautiful and amazing writing keep going dear❤I’ll wait for you to read more beautiful writing🌺😊👏👏👏
Truly amazing! How much can you say with so few words and it is a lovely story I would like to know what happens next in your story. Thanks for sharing Sunset.💖
Great story!
It is wonderful writting Sunset. Excellent work. 👏👏👏 Congrats my dear. So proud of you 😍
You’re such a creative writer, Sunset!
I enjoyed the beautiful short story. Keep it up 👍
Honey your writing is amazing. Keep it going. 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
This sounds like something I read in a romantic book but I love it 😍❤