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  1. May I offer a couple suggestions?

    It’s midnight and I still can’t sleep. I imagine lying down(down really isn’t needed) beside you, your arms around me. You slowly (How about Your xxxxxxx lulls) lull me to sleep, making me smile all the while. (all the while is a bit weak and common and really not needed.) But in the end, it’s just an imagination. You’re still ten feet below me, sharing an eternal embrace with your mistress.

    By eliminating these unneeded words, you have more opportunity to use impact words.

    Jeff

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