They destroyed the house I grew up in just to build another gas station. Now there’s asphalt where I used to play in the yard; racks of candy where I used to read comics; a row of Coke machines where he used to hit her.
I like the new look.
Michael is a part-time lawyer and a full-time dad.
Like unexpected ending!
Nice twist. Thanks.
Excellent insertion of complexity, history,, and drama in just a few carefully-placed words. Really well done!
One of my favorites. Surprise!
Those words say it all! Your mind fills in the details and makes the story yours.