“Please, why are you doing this?”
“You sent my sister to death!”
“It was for her own good!”
“This is for your own good, Bill.”
“This will never stand. You will be found out.”
“It’s too late to change my mind.”
“It was worth a shot.”
“No, it wasn’t.”
Bang!
Ashley Baird is a Grade 11 student in a creative writing class. She was forced to submit this by her teacher.
I enjoy a dialogue driven scene. This is good.
Cheers to both Ashley Baird and her teacher.