Crisp
My pillow greets me
My soft slumber
Recalls romantic memories
My soul whispers…
She finds my pillow
Entangles my dreams
Capture…
We land eyes
walk within a summer’s breeze
Our hearts embrace
A moment held
Till sunbeams
Melt our reality
Tomorrow
Fresh flowers
Will grace the earth
Above you
Fifty words is such a challenge. Patrick hopes to improve.
I think what you’ve written is beautiful! No need for improvement from what I can see!
But I do agree … 50 words IS a challenge! Congrats
3 words – Pre-pubesent cod’s wallop!
Have you posted anything I would love to read it?
Beautiful , love it !
Thank you Lisa and Joy. Christian to be honest I’m glad you took the time to give me your feed back, thank you also.
I feel my comment was a little harsh – I apologise!