The sun beat down on the young man as he waited behind a barred gate.
He was nervous; his mother told him not to go, yet he stood here.
A uniformed guard approached the gate,
released an older gentleman.
He hugged his father for the first time in twenty years.
Sean Bui spends a lot of time on the volleyball court with his teammates. He is a lover of pasta yet is always open to try new foods. Sean, along with his friend, enjoys crafting clothing as well as fabric design for their clothing company Undefined.
Nice! I might have ended with “He hugged his father for the first time.”
:)
What arrogance to suggest another writer’s ending. You,sir, are a …. I leave you to finish my sentence!
Let’s keep things constructive, Will!
It is good to see someone has an idea of what Flash Fiction is about. Thanks. It was good.