Standing by the open doorway, she heard the floor creak behind her.
Too afraid to move, she tried pushing her eyes far enough to see the mirror in her peripherals.
A warm breath caressed her neck. Her pupils widened and her eyes filled with tears.
“Found you,” whispered no reflection.
James started writing at a young age as a means of escaping reality. Now his goal is to redefine the psychological and horror genres.
Atmospheric. Really good 50 word story as it stands, but would make a great preamble to something more substantial. Loved it, good luck James!
Terrifying! Well done!
Very nice. Chilling…
Amazing, can’t wait to read more from this super talented guy!