How fun.
To be sitting all alone,
collapsing in on myself,
and teasing at
a candle’s pale flame,
watching it tenderly
lick away the whorl
of my fingerprint.
The world
left behind is
pink and raised
and less—
not a burn,
but something softer.
Yet
exploding stars know less pain.
Tina Privitera-Reynolds is a young, emerging writer, so be patient. She has had poems published on SpillWords with more publications upcoming. As a beginner in the daunting world of online publication, she is happy to receive any feedback (especially criticism) and helpful tips and tricks. Her biggest goal is to improve.
this builds without giving away the secret at the beginning. as a reader, i enjoy having the truth revealed step by step
Fabulous word picture!