“Why would you do this to me?” the woman cries.
The café falls silent but she doesn’t seem to notice.
The man slowly removes her hand from his shoulder. He smirks as he gets up.
I can’t stop staring as she begins to sob, and I hate myself for it.
Eszter Molnar is a former teacher who lives by the windswept British seaside. She has been published in one of the UK’s biggest subscription magazines for children. By day, she cleans up after preschoolers, by night she writes flash fiction, picture books and Middle Grade fiction.
Wonderful, how you let the reader tell the story. Salute!
Many thanks Ron!
You made me feel a second-hand shame for staring as well. Very effective!
Thanks for your lovely comment!
Completely felt the emotion. So powerfully expressed. Well done!
Thank you Lisa!