It was a light shower, a mere smattering of water droplets barely dampening the ground, but I stared transfixed.
Barely noticing the triumphant whoops of the colonists, I watched tiny rivulets zig-zag down my visor, stunned by the magnitude of our achievement.
We’d done it! It was raining on Mars.
Helen M. Merrick lives in the UK Midlands with her family. When she’s not teaching, she likes to scribble short stories and dream about writing a novel. She might, one day. See more at authorhelenmerrick.wordpress.com.
I like the way the story unfolds over three segments. Nicely controlled storytelling, given the word limit. And I enjoyed the positivity.