4 thoughts on “CINDY CHERRY: Collapse

  1. Interesting use of popcorn and ceilings. Like stars, no two popcorn ceilings are alike; nor are our prayers. The image of teeth feel sharp to me as they fall back on us. We either feel our prayers go painfully unanswered, or they are answered in an unexpected and painful way. This is a tasty poem.

  2. Very thought provoking poem! How will I respond when my “shelters” collapse, when doubt and fear surround me? Will I call on heaven for help, no matter what I feel? Will desperate unbelieving prayers turn to softer, surprising ones? Thanks for a poem of insight, honesty and HOPE!

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