Sure, that night Tammy drove tipsy and too fast. But it wasn’t her fault the truck t-boned us.
I’ve been waiting for her since the wreck, watching her suffer from guilt. She doesn’t understand my signs telling her I’m okay, it’s peaceful here. She’ll find out today. When she arrives.
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Ouf. Great last line.
This is so sad but beautifully told. x
Wow — what a twist.
YES! Love that ending; this is a great story.
“When she arrives.”….gives me chills!
What a dynamite piece of writing! You nailed it!
Oh my!
Such a powerful story in so few words
Wow, you have a great talent in conveying maximum emotions in a minimum of words.
Thank you everyone for reading! And your time to respond. I’m touched! As a reader, I love twists!
Very cool Liz – just wow!
Good twist at the end Liz!
Wow! Wow! Wowww! Many thanks for sharing ❤️
Yes, wow. It’s like you’re in their heads!!