When Jack first heard the whispers, he figured it was just the breeze.
After all, living in the forest attracted creatures of varying degrees.
They became so easy to ignore, simply assigning it to the owls in the trees.
It only became a worry when those whispers turned to pleas.
Michael Samuel lives in Missouri, dreaming up stories in his head. Every so often, they get published.
Nice use of rhyme. The suspense at the end sticks with me after reading.
Nice!
Wow! That is so well constructed , the ending is scarey but wonderful,
Very well composed, nice work.
Intriguing and suggestive of something ‘dark this way comes’. An unsolved mystery. Well done.