The color began light pink. Our love was budding. Ecstatic!
Then it turned hot pink. Deep love. Memorable romantic days. I smiled when ever I saw you. Sweetness all over.
Few years later, pale red. You began to avoid me. You tossed our dates.
Now it’s gray.
Sweetheart, what happened?
Chudy Ebiringa is an author who writes across genres. He won the first prize for the Eaton Literary Agency Short Story contest for the year 2020.
A love story
Thought provoking
A nice one
I really like the story
Great and amazing story 👏
Very interesting story, I have read this story for the fourth time
A good literary piece.
this is a true life situation
This story shows that love is transient
yes! emotions is not steady.af
This a wonderful piece
A lovely tale of the heart
This tale shows the exact behavior of people in matters of the heart
I enjoyed it. Hope it can be turned into a novel.
A fine story. Hope to read it again
My heart is broken
Really? So, what happened later?
This story poked a finger in my heart
Stirs my emotions!
The story is enlightening
Does heart break ever end?
I knew it would end this way
For how long will this continue to happen to people?
Oh! Take a walk my dear
A wonderful emotional reality
This heartbreaker is most likely a male
Must it be a male?
Inspirational , thought provoking and profoundly relatable .
The story is as literary as it is emotional
An emotional reality.
Happens often.
A good literary piece.
A true life reflection.
I agree with you
As a writer, I spot good writers when ever I come in contact with their work. This writer, Chudy, is good in the job.