‘You weren’t worth it.’ The simple truth, stated for the first time. Words that ripple far into the past, acknowledging years of dog-like devotion.
Words that ripple far into the future, opening avenues of opportunity previously ignored.
A subtle change of emphasis creates even more distance. “He wasn’t worth it.”
Madeleine McDonald is a former precis-writer who relishes the challenge of flash and micro fiction.
Wow. So razor-sharp. Every word.
Thank you. I always write long, then cut back.
An entire saga encapsulated in 50 words! Amazing.
Thanks. 50 words concentrate the mind.
Wow! Gets right to the heart, really good