Anna raced into her bathroom. She thought about how much trouble she would be in if her assumption was right. Anna knew her parents would make her marry somebody she didn’t love anymore. She paced back and forth.
Tears rushed down her face as she looked at the pink plus.
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I love the tension in this piece. It really brings the reader into the moment.
Great job making us feel for a character in such a short time span