I knew this stupid wall would be trouble. We intercepted intelligence to “Scramble.” By the time I got there it was chaos. Absolute carnage. There were militia everywhere, cavalry included. The rank stench of death hung in the air. I retched.
My initial impression was that Humpty Dumpty was pushed.
David McTigue is from Liverpool, UK. Writes flash fiction and poetry and loves music, football, crosswords, cookery, reading, and his wife, three kids, and baby grandson.
I’m happy you mentioned the inclusion of the cavalry.
Outstanding work, this. Salute!
Thank you soldier. At ease!
Very clever. The yolk’s on them. Well done!
That last sentence!!! Love it.
This is great. I hope you win best story
Thank you all for your kind comments
brilliant,I thought you were going down the road of Trumps wall so the HD twist made me laugh, :-)
I did not see that last line coming at all. Well done!