Grey skies jigged upon the bus stop as dejected commuters huddled beneath. The endless stream of headlights paraded the relentless downpour.
A man checked his watch. A woman her phone. A dog ducked between.
The bus arrived.
Lucy smiled getting off and nonchalantly, through the applause of puddles, waltzed home.
Raymond lives in Ireland and has been previously published in 101 words and 101 fiction.
A charming notion, charmingly presented.
Thank You, Alex.
What did I miss? Nothing here to call this a story. So, one person has a happy view of the world others don’t share…..but I was expecting more.
One person’s happy view interrupting a dismal setting is a story
Thanks for not being shy, Shoshauna.
I guess it is a story (a great one), and I like it very much. It made me smile.
Thank you.
Thank you, Gergely.