My eyes widened in shock as I saw him kneeling before me. A handsome gentleman was right there on his knees with a ring in his hand. I didn’t know who he was, but I was ready to accept anyways. “Will you marry me, Joanne?” he said.
My name’s Brandon.
Ash K. Gray is an amateur young writer. They’ve written several short stories and a few articles, mainly for fun. They mostly write comedy, parody or psychological thrillers, but may occasionally try a different genre.
Nice story. Surprise ending. Well done.
(Friendly proof-read: I think you omitted a verb: “I didn’t (know) who he was…”)
Can’t believe I missed that! Oops. I’ll add in the “know” there and change the final sentence to “name’s” instead of “name is”, to satisfy myself on the matter. :)
Sad…
Well, I wasn’t expecting that! Well done Ash!