Let’s make—
up – ah, good, but it was your fault
a face – nah, na, na, nah, nah
due – that’s enough, eh
a difference – good for us
believe – ah, that’s cute
up – no, it was my fault
it better – we’re both at fault
And so
out – umm, that’s new, yes, ooh!
Dee Artea found a creative voice at the age of 77, three years ago, from which emerged a variety of short stories and poems – many of which have been published in online journals and magazines such as Mono, Altered Reality, CommuterLit, Tilted House, and Bewildering Stories.
This made me smile! You’re an inspiration!
Love the word play and potentiality of the beginning of each line :)
Never too late to find your creative voice! I love your style of writing!
Dee, your ‘Making’ is so musical-ooh!. Thank you.
IT ….took me a moment,
Is clever
Is cute, is over fast!
Good on ya D.