I stare out the window, willing her to appear.
What is taking her so long? Stuck in traffic? Flat tire? Grisly accident?
No. I won’t think the worst this time.
At last, headlights in the driveway.
Before she can knock, I wrench the door open and snatch the DoorDash bag.
Jennifer Metcalf lives in New Hampshire and has written stories, articles, and poems for several children’s magazines. She is currently working on a humorous novel for women about the trials of being a stay-at-home mom.
Great twist to end on!
Funny twist! The first part sounded like a parent worrying about a daughter driving home at night.
Very funny flash! Terrific start to my day!
Nice, believable twist. Well done!
Good job Jen.
I had sat down and was prepared to read for a coupe of hours.
What a surprise. Just like the ending.
I am proud of you.
Larry Merrill
Made me smile. Wasn’t looking for that ending.
Haha! Clever!
Love it! Very witty 👏
I like the twist at the end.