9 thoughts on “KEN GOSSE: Burnt Oftenings

  1. Many thanks to all of you who shared their encouraging thoughts! Smiles … I love that word. If you’ve read any of my past 50-Word Stories, you’ll realize that nearly everything I write is metric and rhyming. Tweaking both to exactly 50 words is a fun challenge for me. This is one of the few where I used monorhyme—the same end rhyme for every line but without duplicating any of the end words (the lines were kinda short for internal rhyme, like Kelsey’s). And thanks, Karin, for noticing the influence of Ogden Nash. He’s definitely one of my faves.

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