While he was doing the dishes or cooking dinner.
While he was baking brownies, cleaning the oven, folding laundry, cleaning the toilet, or vacuuming the rugs.
No woman ever shot a man while he washed the floor, made the bed, or hung curtains.
Unless he’s doing it for another woman.
Rita Riebel Mitchell writes in the Pinelands of South Jersey. Her work appears in Flash Fiction Magazine, Versification, Black Hare Press, 101 Words, and others. Visit her at FridayMicro.com.
Hmmm, interesting thought!
Interesting twist
Perfect! This man says that that is oh so poignantly true.
Nicely executed.
Point made, and taken to heart …
Well done!
Brilliant
Well said!
Love this!
This is the best 50 worder I’ve read in a long time. Brilliant in simplicity and sharply poignant with its ending.
Thanks so much to everyone for commenting! I appreciate your feedback.
LOL good one!