It seems in vain that he’ll complain
although he fain will make it plain
along this vein, severe wrist pain
is driving him insane.
And though his writing’s not inane—
the words are clear, they’re not arcane—
since some will chafe at his campaign,
he should refrain from this refrain.
Ken Gosse usually writes whimsical, rhymed verse. First published in First Literary Review–East in November 2016, later in Pure Slush, Home Planet News, Lothlorien Poetry Journal, Spillwords, and many others. Raised in Chicago suburbs, now retired, he and his wife live in Mesa, AZ, with rescue dogs and cats.
silly, funny, adorable
good job, nicely written and rhymed
Got confused a bit, doubled back to see if I will get my head around it but still struggles.
I suspect it must have something to do with my comprehension.