They said no one gets stuck anymore and then I got stuck.
So I wailed and hollered and banged with my palms flat on the slick white plastic.
No one.
Nothing.
And then came the sound.
That terrible, horrible cry.
Someone was coming behind me, fast.
And then a shadow.
Ron Fromstein is a largely self-taught writer from Toronto who has also lived in Chicago, New Orleans Vacouver and Iceland.
Great tension. I can almost see what happened at the end but still leaves me guessing the possibilities.
Thanks very much Mary!
Visceral and well done!
Muchly appreciated
This actually happened to me at a water park in Paris in the early nineties. Could have done with a trigger warning ;-)
Sorry to hear Mike and thanks for reading all the same.