“Show, don’t tell,” you told me. “Use action to illustrate your point.”
Of course, you were right. I’d failed to get what I wanted to say across.
“I really do love you,” I said. Then I picked up my socks from the floor and put them in the wash basket.
David Rae wrote this story. See more at davidrae-stories.com.
LOL!
Clever and so true! Great job.
So true, well done!
Thank you, you made me laugh.
Nicely done David. You made me laugh
David this is great. Love the idea of the 50 word stories.
Thanks everyone for your kind comments
Oh David Rae. I like your style. That IS a brilliant piece of writing indeed. It left me smiling and wanting more. Thank you.
BTW, THIS is Selma Writes… Story Cartel Course ‘Partner’
Thanks for sharing your work. I Bless you.
I’ve managed to change name to my Author Name. Just giving you the heads up. I still love your genius in this piece. I shared on Twitter. See you around Partner.