End the pain and heartache. Bring others pleasure. Give people some happiness. Unrealistic chasing of desires create hate and rejection. Unbearable living makes love impossible.
Impossible love makes living unbearable. Rejection and hate create desires of chasing unrealistic happiness. Some people give pleasure, others bring heartache and pain. The end.
Pontius Paiva is a kook of an elihphile who can’t do a single pullup. His stories fly under the radar at pontiuspaiva.com.
Editor: Read Pontius’s previous palindrome story here.
Liked II.
I could never.
I’m impressed– the patience and cleverness to make the whole thing work.
So clever. Well done :)
I applaud you. Crafting original palindromes aren’t an easy feat. I’ve tried a few myself. Thanks for sharing.
This is so clever. I used the editor’s one to read your previous story. Excellent. Well done Pontius!
I’m happy to hear people are enjoying my work. Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments!